My first thought when I hear 'theres a reason for every word.': amateur.
Don't take yourself so seriously. Unless you've literally tested every word, theres not a reason for every word. You are just flinging paint on a wall and calling it art.
(side note: you're young, its not bad being called an amateur. It's a good time for you to get rid of bad habits)
Yeah. And the second thought is: hand it off for a second opinion earlier. Writing copy is teamwork, except for experts at writing copy (exactly as writing code is teamwork, requiring review by someone else and refactoring).
Don't take yourself so seriously. Unless you've literally tested every word, theres not a reason for every word. You are just flinging paint on a wall and calling it art.
(side note: you're young, its not bad being called an amateur. It's a good time for you to get rid of bad habits)