Okay this guy wrote paragraph(s) retorting each individual line in a memo. The author is reading way too much into this. They wrote their opinion, this clearly wasn't a fact finding mission.
I'd probably give this a "C-" for poor format, unbalanced opinionated writing, and it's length (too long).
In the future, it's fine to pick a side, but make a case and defend it with research. Don't ask a series of questions in response to a memo. Questions are unconvincing at best.
"Should your kids be home before 10PM?" vs "Your kids should be home before 10PM"
Hopefully this helps the author improve their writing. I don't even have a Nokia phone, I have no phone. Maybe we'd be friends.
I'd probably give this a "C-" for poor format, unbalanced opinionated writing, and it's length (too long).
In the future, it's fine to pick a side, but make a case and defend it with research. Don't ask a series of questions in response to a memo. Questions are unconvincing at best.
"Should your kids be home before 10PM?" vs "Your kids should be home before 10PM"
Hopefully this helps the author improve their writing. I don't even have a Nokia phone, I have no phone. Maybe we'd be friends.