The presentation was mainly for the audience that was present at the conference, which was mainly people who have used jj for a relatively long time, so I think part of the problem is just a mismatch between audiences there and on YouTube.
I agree about being more exciting. Not sure how to improve that :P I drink too much coffee all the time that I don't notice any difference. Harder drugs, perhaps :)
Which is fair as is not expecting everyone to be able to deliver a barnstorming talk. At least not without training.
I'd also flag that the audio is not good which isn't your fault. The trend towards conferences just pointing a camera at a lectern and throwing the footage on YouTube is unfortunate especially when it replaces circulating the slides as opposed to augmenting them. As a form of archive for attendees to review it works but not as a distribution channel.
The presentation was mainly for the audience that was present at the conference, which was mainly people who have used jj for a relatively long time, so I think part of the problem is just a mismatch between audiences there and on YouTube.
I agree about being more exciting. Not sure how to improve that :P I drink too much coffee all the time that I don't notice any difference. Harder drugs, perhaps :)