For me the ChatGPT one is worse due to factual inaccuracies like the "presumption of humanity" which in the human version is "afforded so easily to others" - fair enough and with the LLM "presumption of humanity that others receive without question" which is not true - lots of people get questioned.

Beyond the stylistics bits "history—my history" which I don't really mind what make it bad to me is detachment from reality.