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		auston on June 6, 2009 \| parent \| context \| favorite \| on: Ask HN: Review my startup Your design is fine as it is for a first iteration - your choice of words is not (that is, in my opinion). "GREAT IDEAS, CHALLENGES & AWARDS a bridge between the worlds of education and work." I have no idea what that means for anything - tell me what you do in more of a straight forward fashion. Those are all fairly uninformative words try something like.... "Aleveo helps your company get fresh new ideas -Engage youth by evaluating their fresh ideas to improve your products/offering-"

dejan on June 6, 2009 [–]

I agree, I am not satisfied with it either. However, compromises are made to put it online. I would like to change it with more visual. Will consider this.

Thanks for the comment!

rjprins on June 6, 2009 | [–]

Your previous comment was already a lot more clearer to me then the front page. :)

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